Flamingo Watching Poems by Kay Ryan
Copper Beach Press,
1994; 64 pages; paper, $9.95.
Reviewed by June Owens
he late May Sarton said of Kay Ryan's writing that she "makes it
all fresh again with her highly original vision, her elegant, quirky
craft." Anyone who reads Flamingo Watching will come to see why Ryan's
work deserves such praise and why that praise came from one of our most
respected women poets.
An attractively produced book, Flamingo Watching is set in handsome
New Baskerville and is printed on quality, cream-colored paper. It is
comprised of three parts: "Habitat and Range", 'Behavior", and "Common
Names", tidy (if a bit too manifest) headings, like those found in
ornithological encyclopedias. Ryan's poems are exceptional, the
preponderance of them short and succinct: "I see the yellow maculations
spread/across bleak hills of what I said/ I'd always think; a stippling of
white/ upon the grey; a pink the shade/ of what I said I'd never say." All
spoken in a voice as singular as the words it speaks about spring.
It should come as no surprise that Californian Ryan, who teaches
writing at the College of Marin, has placed poetry in a long list of
topnotch publications, among them American Poetry Review, The American
Scholar, The Atlantic, The Formalist. One wonders--although many of Ryan's
poems in this book, use nature metaphorically or as a point of departure,
most of them are landscapes of texture the likes of which could easily have
found their way into the best ecological and conservancy magazines, The
Amicus Journal, Green Fuse, Wilderness and yes, Snowy Egret.
Poems from all schools lend themselves quite amicably to
excerption. Ryan's do not. One has to have the whole poem in order to
hear and to see what extraordinary things she does with language and
timing. She writes affectionately and from the freshest of viewpoints
about deer, snake, osprey, turtle, rabbit, canary and her flamingo,
displaying sentiment without sentimentality. Ryan's sly internal slant and
near rhymes hint at playfulness.
Sometimes the poems seem lighthearted when they are as serious as the
flamingo of her title poem: "She seems/ unnatural by nature--/ too vivid
and peculiar/ a structure to be pretty,/ and flexible to the point/ of
oddity."
A grand connection between this earth and the human spirit is
exhibited in Ryan's work. Alliterative phrasings imbue these poems with
musicality: "this lean, this slight/ slant,", "a three-inch inspiration",
"The whole loaf's loft". Surprise leaps up from the poems where syntax is
everything, and leaps so naturally as to imply that the words have been
merely tossed together. These are pink poems. They perch. They drape.
They preen. They incubate. They stretch their facile necks. And we can
do no less than admire. Nature-inspired and non-judgmental, Ryan knocks at
the door of the environment; if in a lopsided manner, the link between
humankind and the ecology is there especially when we look at "Emptiness":
Emptiness cannot be
compressed. Nor can it
fight abuse. Nor is there
an endless West hosting
elk, antelope, and the
tough cayuse. This is
true also of the mind:
it can get used.<
To put things under another light, one might say that Kay Ryan is
a soft-shoe dancer sprinkling wonderful, whispery esses like grains of sand
all over her pages, cascading over them in circles with the toes of her
imagination.
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