Writing Correspondence
Modules:
 

Composing Messages


  • Choose your audience carefully. Send messages only to those who need to read them. Limit the number of copies you send. But always remember, you audience can easily forward your email to anyone.
  • Don't randomly send carbon copies. Readers will note where the other copies are going. (If you must send copies and don't want readers to know, use the blind copy - Bcc: - feature.)

Which of these is addressed appropriately?


  1. To: instructor@vt.edu
    Subject: ENGL 3764: My grade on paper 4
    cc: president@vt.edu, mom@home.com, dad@home.com
    bcc:


  2. To: instructor@vt.edu
    Subject: ENGL 3764: My grade on paper 4
    cc:
    bcc:


  3. To: instructor@vt.edu
    Subject: ENGL 3764: My grade on paper 4
    cc: president@vt.edu
    bcc: president@whitehouse.gov


  4. To: engl3764_classList@listserv.vt.edu
    Subject: ENGL 3764: My grade on paper 4
    cc: instructor@vt.edu
    bcc:

  • Creating meaningful subject lines. Readers use them to gauge the importance of the message, and often delete or delay reading messages with vague or unhelpful subject lines.
Subject: Funding Opportunities Available from NSF (Deadline 2 April)

Subject: Your Request for Funding is Approved

Which of these is a good subject line?

  1. About that thing
  2. Help
  3. ENGL 3764: Assignment #2 clarification
  4. Re: Your message

  • Use high-priority flaggings when necessary to alert colleagues that the message requires immediate attention.
  • Begin with a salutation (Dear Professor Jones,)
  • Provide adequate context. You can quote the e-mail you are responding to, but include only enough of the previous message to make it clear, not the whole message.

  • Use a pattern of organization that fits your purpose.
  • Be concise. E-mails are not essays. If you have longer documents, consider using attachments.

Formality

  • Think carefully about the entire document (from your user name to your signature). Readers will use the cues you provide to form impressions of you. These cues include your--
    • User Name (dwhite, hot&heavy, smartmouth)

    • Domain name (vt.edu, aol.com)

    • Grammar, punctuation, and spelling. In the workplace, capitalize the first letter in a sentence, even if you write in all lower-case to your friends. But remember that using all capital letters is considered as rude as shouting. Use full caps only for emphasis.
Signatures
  • If you use more than one e-mail service, think carefully about which e-mail domain you want your message to come from (vt.edu, excite.com, hotmail.com). Free, Internet-based services always attach an ad for that service and a URL at the bottom of every message you send. Many people, including professors typically don't appreciate advertising when they read their e-mail.
  • Create clear and informative signature files. Include your e-mail address, phone number, and post office address.
  • If you use the signature function to attach your favorite quotation to the end of every message, consider turning it off for professional correspondence. When the recipient sees the exact same quotation from you in every single message they receive, they will eventually begin to get annoyed, if not irate, no matter how good the quotation is or how personally meaningful the quotation is to you.
  • Be patient while waiting for a response. Don't be tempted to assume the worst simply because you haven't received a reply in less than 10 minutes.

What's wrong with the following e-mail?

To: myinstructor@vt.edu
Subject: CLASS
From: greekfreak@aol.com
cc: engl3764_classList@listserv.vt.edu

I'M IN YOUR CLASS. IS THEIR AN ASSIGNMENT ON THURSDAY.

P.S. I NEED TO KNOW IN THE NEXT 30 MINUTES.
THX.
--
JOHN
!!!!Make money fast!!!!
Call 555-1234 to find out how!

  1. It uses ALL CAPS, instead of regular type.
  2. The username (and domain) are not appropriate.
  3. The message is copied to the class listserv
  4. There's no salutation
  5. The subject line is meaningless
  6. Mis-spelling and grammar
  7. No organization or context in the message
  8. Signature is uninformative and inappropriate
  9. All of the above
  10. a, b, c, d, e, g, h
  11. a, b, c, e, h

Format/Design Considerations

  • Design your message to make it readable and clear.
    • Keep paragraphs short.
    • Keep lines under seventy-five characters long.
    • Keep messages under twenty-five lines long.
    • Double-space between paragraphs.
    • Use lists to keep messages short and direct.

  • Limit emoticons or other symbols for gestures and intonation. They may be necessary to help the reader understand the tone, but you should avoid them altogether in formal communications with employers and professors. Common "emoticons" include:

    • : - ) Smileys (indicates humor)
    • : - ò Asterisks (impish grin)
    • ; - ) Wink
    • : - ( Sad
    • : - / Mixed Feelings

  • Use abbreviations sparingly, much the same way you would use jargon. Common abbreviations include:

    • BTW By the way
    • CUL See you later
    • IMHO In my humble opinion
    • F2F Face to face
    • WYSIWYG What you see is what you get

Review: Exercises and Summary -->

Sources:

Locker, Kitty O. Business and Administrative Communication, 4th ed. Boston: Irwin, 1998.

Hairston, Maxine, Ruszkiewicz, John, and Christy Friend. The Scott, Foresman Handbook for Writers, 5th ed. New York: Longman, 1999.

 
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